I WANT TO BE.........
Love is the grandest thing,
Through turmoil’s and grief
Unconditional love offering,
Forever true to me I believe.
A comforter when the tides come down,
Being a father to children who aren’t his own.
Lifting me up during a healing breakdown,
Giving to me all the love he has known.
Romantic dinners, sweet smoothing music,
Candles with passionate vanilla scents.
My sturdy rock, when I am about to lose it,
He embraces me, forgives me, when my energies spent.
As cancer secures my heart, and I lose my faith,
It is he who continues to fight for me.
Rekindling the light, he gently kisses my face,
Reminding me of love here, through tear filled eyes I see…
A passionate man, giving me his all,
My protector, my lover & my best friend!
So as I stand here, I have to make a call,
How to live from here until my final end.
My decision has been made; I can’t wait any more,
What I’m about to do will rock the walls of A.p.
I do not know what God has in store,
But I do know this; I love the man before me.
So before 120,007 people and the number still grows,
I want you, your love, and your soul, to be my very own.
I am asking you,
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I love you completely heart and soul.
You My Angel, are the greatest I have ever known…
I Love You Always…
Tory
Author notes
Love to me.. indeed is what i have penned. LOL.
My darling Angel,
I love you with all that i am. I love the way you tend to me, my heart my soul, my mind.
I cant imagine life without you. As i face some troubles waters, i only hope to have you safely walking beside me. Not befor eme or after me, but hand in hand beside me.
Yes i played around in the past, and well , now Im not. Officially this is it. Take it as you wish.
Always and forever
Passions<3
In a list
A contest entry
- All for Love! by Auburn Sunrise.
1000 points, ended November 13, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow this is such a very very beautiful and truly loving dedication my sweet dear sis your words are so full of love and compassion and spoken so truly tenderly!!! This is so heartfelt!!! I love it oh sis so wonderful you are amazing so incredible I barely know how to comment anymore cuz ur writes are way too incredible for my remarks!!!! I love you dearly!!!
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awww wow mum this is just amazing...can i be bridesmaid hehe. this is just so full of love and passion and dad is an amazing man who just keeps his head up. im here for you aswell. and i hope and wish you many many yearts of happiness
i love you mum
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WHOA!!!!
That's a first! A marriage proposal on AP? LOL. I love it!!!
This was beautiful, well-written, and even heart-wrenching!
I am so sorry about what you're going through, but I'm glad you have the love of your life to stand beside you!
Well done!
Thank you so much for entering!
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Woooooooow brilliant write Passion I love this I connected with your feeling, fantastic usuage of words It flowed perfectly expressing your feelings to a special someone to you
I've read it twice and it seemed even more amazing the second time,it's great with every read
keep it up and thanks for sharing
~Lady Yunasleka~
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Please pass the tissues tears are flowing over here*hug*...I am so wonderfully Happy!
Your happiness is so very important to me *hug* *kiss* *hug*...Congratssssss and I want a invite:))
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I bid you both many infinite lifetimes of happy bliss - many loving blessings always xxx Love from your Sis
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YES, yes, oh yes, yes, yes, yes, she loves me, she loves me.Woooooooo Hooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
*doing the Snoopy Dance* Lalalalalala
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Yipppppppppppppppppppppppeeeeeeeeeeeee
Going to the chaple they are going to get marrrrried.... Ya........
Congradulations love birds.....
Delila
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Oh myyyyyyy, Nothing like being put on the spot huh? Honey, you know that I love you with all that I am, and that you mean more to me than anything but my sobriety. Because without it, I would not be worthy of what you offer this humble old man. That being said, I am afraid that I will have to say.......
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psssst dad say yes so i can be bridesmaid hehe
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Absolutely wonderful
I think this has to be one of the best I've read. I got chill bumps and kept them almost the whole time! Excellent work!!!
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Angels are presented to us in many guises. They are often hidden and blessing us unknowingly, yet some are dropped on our doorstep and placed right in our paths.
I am so glad that you feel so strongly this way, it is a true delight to behold. My blessings on you both and all my best wishes to you in this endeavor.
So very emotional and heartfelt. A beautiful proposal that any man would love to receive.
Love you dear sis,
Dave
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dear god in heaven...my AP grandmother making a proposal right here on AP! You are amazing and so is your love for this man
I only wish all wives and husbands felt this way or even lovers towards each other. I cant wait to see his answer! Your the sweetest and deserve only the best! This is so truly beautiful and touching Love you and many blessings
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LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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hehe, see how great you are? How can everyone NOT love you! Geez LOUIZ your freakin awesome and so romantic
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Wow, this is so beautiful and heartfelt!
Whoever you wrote this for is a very lucky
man! I do hope that you give this to him
and make your feelings known. You have a
wonderful heart and mind to write such a
sweet and loving poem. I really enjoyed
reading it and I hope that you get this
special person that you love so much!
Wonderful work here my friend as always.
Always a pleasure to read you and all the
best to you with this one in the contest!
Jeremy0826
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OMG
OH I am completely speechless this is soooooooo romantic. He better say Yes.. HeHe I am sure he will Oh my I am so blessed to know you both
Oh how exciteing
~jumping for joy~..... Oh my oh my......
Love you guys
Delila
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