Evictions of beatitude,
Complex with attitude,
in tones of poetry out of control,
composed of phonetic words.
flood of everything, flood of nothing.
Static, steamy images
invite for dance,
Be in verses, be in prose.
Between sentences,,,feelings
Between abysses
attractive faminine.
rises...goes down in dreams,
driving demented
supports between madness
the provocative poetry.
A flame illuminates black awareness,
wind cools, seasons.
The wine accompanies flesh.
Banished words,
Betrayed words,
Without understanding universe,
make an effort in vain
to make a beauty
transparent, cheeky,
indignant, coherent,
wanting to dominate.
Voice of wind,
Fire of wisdom,
Howls of lament.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture by Idle mind wondering
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A contest entry
- PIF Image inspired = reopenend by Idle Mind Wondering.
1050 points, ended November 20, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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There is a great deal of imagery here but it it did not come together for me.
A great effort
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