Wonderful power in this place
For you are the Heavenly Father
You sent your son to die for us
I will worship you forever
Author notes
Losing/Gaining faith in god
A contest entry
- Christian Teens -- write a VERY SHORT poem to get featured in an e-zine! :) by twinkling of an eye.
300 points, ended November 26, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Options: titles, topics... by LostInTheDream.
450 points, ended February 8, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Broken Rule
You did not put the option number in your authors notes, if its not fixed by the time i judge this piece will be DQ'd. -
Nice
Its a great piece, and it retains simplicity while holding a life altering message. Thank you for entering. -
A big AMEN! This is a lovely piece, thanks for entering. So true and full of praise.
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