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Mask
I don't have to wear a mask
I don't need to hide behind plastered smiles
Bugged out eyes
or silent tears
A false facade intended to deceive

Behind forest eyes dwells a crystal
An ugly sort of monstrous thing
With an endless array of faces
Hideous, tragic, joyful
Beautiful in every single cut-throat way

Facets of smooth and shiny glass
glimmering and sweet
Reflect the laughter of my innocence
Almost overrun by garbling sores

of a boiled bitter acid

whose touch is enticingly corrosive

 

Beside the blinding tranquil hues

lie the creeping shadows

Of a deadly depression

where crystal white has been corrupted

Ringing cries of desperation

echo amongst glass confines

 

Spinning, out of control

As a world

my world

my top

my mind

Which face will fate choose to bestow upon you?

 

Author notes

Each face of the crystal inside my soul represent a different side of me, almost always in conflict with one another.

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  • adarknesswithin
    October 1

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    Wow, finally,

    some true incite to a normal humanbeing! Really good discriptions. Comparing the human mind to a crystal is brilliant. I'd like to see some new work of yours if you'll post it some time.


  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    November 16, 2007
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    The vocabulary here is just amazing. Very well written indeed and I will be adding you to the finalist list however because of some unknown technical issues I'm having please tell me if you don't see this on the list. Thanks for the entry! ♥ Bandaid.

    • Forest Eyes
      November 22, 2007
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      Thank you! Umm, I don't see it on the list yet, but that's fine. Thank you so much.

  • DarkRomantic113
    November 11, 2007
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    The darker side of you...well written