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Throw my last present in the trash, along with yourself

I could crush you with 4 phone calls.

1—Chemical mix-up in your chosen form of toxin,
leading to paralysis and a never ending plea for mercy.
He won’t give you mercy.
You broke his child,
his love,
the girl who never grew up.


2—Attacks of the mind
and monitored instructions from a force so great
that nothing in the world could compare.
A military task force in your back yard,
aching for you to near a window,
itching to blow your mind with a few rounds.



3—Brute force, impossible to intimidate
ready and willing to rip your arms and legs
one by one from their sockets.
Telling you how much of a fool you were to hurt me,
the light on top of his world.



And my vicious 4—
The truth of the past few years would fly out
of our mouths as we mock your words
of care and affection,
while we lock hands,
summoning every possible strength from our bodies
to tear you into tiny steaks,
and feed you to our pets.


And in this sad, angry discourse
you may see what you have done.


My voice may be heard through it all,
and my tears won’t bring you comfort.
I know everything that has happened,
and from the start I should have known the tragic ending,
not of us—

of You.

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  • broken-colours
    April 18, 2008

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    Very raw and painful, my dear. Not quite sure as to what the situation is -- I'm sure it's complicated -- but you've expressed yourself eloquently, as always.

  • ryanxxx.
    November 12, 2007

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    holy cow

    omg im so fucking mind blown right now idk what to say it is flawless and tres powerful im like wow wow wow amy amazing should be your name lol


  • Fireworks
    November 12, 2007

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    Vicious, malicious;
    and a little bit
    RELENTLESS.

    Oh dizzamn.

    Please feel better...
    I'm an actress for a reason.

    This is beautiful.
    You're beautiful.
    Everything will be beautiful again.

    I'll make damn sure.

    (That you can't ever leave.)

    (You won't ever get too far from me,
    you'll never get too far from me.)
    Haha. Had to bust into song.

  • B sus
    November 11, 2007
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    ouch.


    • Nuclear
      November 12, 2007
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      Yeah, it was meant to hurt.
      [please, do not think it is about you.]

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