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My New Best Friend

Today i met a great new friend
who knew me right away
it was funny how she understood
all i had to say

She listened to my problems
she listened to my dreams
we talked about love and life
she's been there to it seems

I never once felt judged by her
she knew just how i felt
she seemed to just accept me
and all the problems that i've delt

She didn't interupt me
or need to have her say
she just listened patiently
and didn't go away

I wanted her to understand
how much this meant to me
but as i went to hug her
something startled me

I put my arms in front of me
and went to pull her near
and realized that my new best friend
was nothing but a mirror.

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  • honey bear
    November 23, 2007

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    good work, we must learn to make friends with our inner self, especialy if we have been through bad times as this can be a big part of the healing proccess kep up the good work


  • MonkeyCharmer93
    November 12, 2007
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    WOW amazing write i love it! it's very true! keep it up!


  • lyricsfordummys1
    November 11, 2007
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    I didn't expect the ending. I liked how it didn't end how expected. Very nice and well written.


  • parntsoftwins
    November 11, 2007
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    WOW amazing!! I loved the entire poem then the end just blew me away! great job!!!