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Let's unwrite these pages and write our own words

"Your sins into me oh my beautiful one"
-AFI, "Silver and Cold"







I looked up
from the bottom of hole
and couldnt see the sun shining through
and I could only think of you

I grabbed at my dirt prison
pulling myself up
I fell-
again and again

One person passed
I asked for a rope
he looked around
and said there was no rope

A second man comes
I asked again for a rope
he looks down
and spits in my face

A third will pass
and i will try for a rope again
he will sigh
and will say to get myself out

No one else will come
and I'll stay down here

(Cough, Cough)
I try again
and get to the top
seeing you staring down
you try to push me back- not again

I dont let go of the ground
no matter how hard you push
I get out
and you arent here

I sigh
















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  • warpedsenseoflife
    November 11, 2007

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    WOW

    wow, simply wow ...this was amazing. How did you come up with this idea? it's very ingenious. so creative