autumn cool, crisp air
harbingers winter's solstice
days become shorter
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beautiful glow shines
aurora borealis
encapsulating
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snow gently falling
crystals of unique wonder
peaceful for the soul
Author notes
3 separate sets of Haikus all relating towards Winter's solstice
A contest entry
- HAIKU TIME by Swan song.
650 points, ended November 24, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dust Off Those Old Haiku (Traditional 5-7-5) by Pollycheck.
425 points, ended December 15, 2007, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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autumn cool, crisp air
harbingers winter's solstice
days become shorter
***********************************
beautiful glow shines
aurora borealis
encapsulating
***********************************
snow gently falling
crystals of unique wonder
peaceful for the soul
Thank you for your entry into mu ku contest. All three of these haiku are very well sritten and paint a very nice picture of winter. -
Very nicely done. This is the second haiku about winter or fall. I'm going to have to turn up the thermostat pretty soon!
Great haiku!
John
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the day before Thanksgiving my area had 5 inches of snow and today we had freezing rain/ snow / rain. Each day we have had windchills in the +10 to +25 ranges for the past couple weeks best wishes always m2
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Very well done I will be back to read these lovely little gems again
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Beautiful imagery....
I love to read and write haiku about the beauty in nature. This permeates the senses. I, too, would love to see the Aurora Borealis. I've seen some pretty spectacular photos of it. I can imagine it would be encapsulating to see it up close. Very well done! Good luck with Swan Song's contest.
Don
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All are wonderful
But especially enjoy the middle one. I'd love to witness the aurora borealis within my lifetime. Good stuff!
-Steve
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