Darkness always calls you out,
To comfort you without a doubt,
You dance and sing in this rain,
Nothing will ever cause you pain,
Your hair, you always dye it black,
In paled skin beauty you do not lack,
The bat tattoo on your left hand,
Is the key to all your darker land,
You sit and admire this beautiful moon,
Hoping your love will find you soon,
You listen to "Love You to Death",
And and in the cold you see your breath,
You realize that you rule the world,
As the perfect Gothicgirl.
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A poem about myself...
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this poem worked rele well....congrats
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I agree with the rest of the comments...your wording made everything flow nicely..good stuff
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Great Gothic writing
Great writing, very indepth of dark passion in your writing I loved.
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I agree... this is a very wonderful little piece and I too did enjoy it!! Great job, i look forward to reading more by you.
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Nicly done, I enjoyed reading very much. The flow of the poem is wonderful! Can't wait to read more by you.
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Thank you very much, hopefully more people will read it....
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