happy bubbles
uplifting bubbles
hopeful bubbles
smiling bubbles
pretty bubbles
floating along so very nicely
making everybody smile and feel warm
fulfilling their hearts
filling their minds
with great feelings
i wish they would never burst....
A contest entry
- I'm Forever Blowing Bubbles by pearl-dragon.
1050 points, ended November 25, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - finding love by Hecate616.
350 points, ended March 17, 2008, 143 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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=) haha I liked this.
Best of luck -
lol. I like the ones that go to my head that I can drink! lol. nice write!
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THis is really lovely
I like the structure of it
all round good job and good luck pet..xo
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never burst...
Trouble is it only takes one prick to burst a bubble... Great work my friend! Good luck in the contest!
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you make me want to live in a bubble now godd luck .nice little entry peter
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I'm still racing around trying to catch your bubbles; so many of them and they're so pretty. Thank you for sharing them with me and for entering my contest.
Margaret
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