your concept of me
my concept of you
our desires meeting
each fooling oneself
and believing this is the best ever
and each enjoying
giving - receiving
feeling totally complete if only for a very short while
A contest entry
- Expressing Your True Sensuality~ by poet2angels.
625 points, ended November 18, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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nice view great take good luck
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wow....
A different point of view on love and sensuality...
Beautifully written
Lynda
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Nice flow with a nice end. Great poem
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a very short while...
Better to feel like that for a short while than never at all! Well written my friend... you express yourself well! Good luck in the contest!
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