Passions delight under
moonlit skies of indigo
Caressed desires of souls
in poetic consummation
dreamt wondrous promises
Entwined closely of hearts
no longer distanced by seas
Our ecstasy is an ambrosia
of love's gentle whisperings
unique and rare like crystal tears
Author notes
Prompt is: SWEET OBSCENITY
A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries 40 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended November 12, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WOW!!!
This was simple awesome! i loved this so much! so much elegance in all your lines... so much beauty in every word!
This was an amazing poem! great read! Lovely piece... best of luck in the contest!
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Oooooh....
Entwined closely of hearts
no longer distanced by seas
Our ecstasy is an ambrosia
of love's gentle whisperings
unique and rare like crystal tears
I love the simile in the last line. What a perfect line to end a truly perfect poem!
Don
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Very beautiful. Lovely flow and deep emotional feel. Makes the reader feel the love and want to be a part of it.
Great job!
Thank you for entering!
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