Little angels are with us
Everywhere we are
True kind angels
Won't ever be far.
They smile down at us
Watching as we play
Trying to guide us
Through each upcoming day.
Through trouble times and sorrow
Through moments of question and of doubt
Even through the times we pout
Little angels place us in the right route.
Author notes
Pic Prompt #2
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF One Day Quickie (open for prewrites due to my mistake) by Stickboy.
950 points, ended November 14, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This is for a contest (pic prompt)
Comments
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this was a rhyme poem
and i liked it
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Like this one...
Having first hand experiances with Angels I'm digging this poem.
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I love the use of angels in your poetry... It is very conforting to read..
Another beauty and once again good luck to you in the contest
Delila
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Nicely done. Truly touching in a spiratual sense. It's always good to know that there may be someone or something up there watching over us. A gentle caress upon our minds to let us know we can make it through this life. Great work!
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Our guardian angels do push us in the right direction I feel more than we realize. Oh the guilt!! lol Lovely job.
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hee hee this was so cute thank you for sharing this and for entering contest best of luck to you
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I love little angels
they do sometimes seem to be everywhere, and even better if they are when we need them most! Thank you for sharing! love this~blessings always and best to you in the contest~
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Very Cute
I agree there are Angels with us every where. Very cute write and great reminder that there is always Angels watching over us to confort and bring us through lifes trails and also to pleasure in our accomplishments. thanks for the wonderful comment and encouragement on my poem.
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This is cute. Great write and thanks for the comment. Good luck in the contest with this one.
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Joel,
Well done. I love anything with angels. Good luck in the contest. Keep that ink flowing. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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this is very cute. Good luck in the contest
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i like this hunni
well done -
Nice
Joel this is so true and we often forget in the hustle bustle of our life and miss thanking God for sending guiding angels our way that we so very often ignore... very spiritual and uplighting poem you have penned... this is a very fine example of rhyming form of poetry which is done just right, not forced... good luck in the contest... take care Minoo
Just quick note:
Trying to guide is - here needs to be us, I think...
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