Frogs must be thinking while sitting on grass
if he should take the next leap or if he should pass
for he knows if he does he will bump his ass.
A contest entry
- The Result Of Boredom: A "Whatever" Contest by Exodus.
525 points, ended January 25, 2008, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - funny shit by JeremyWilliams.
360 points, ended December 26, 2007, 8 entries
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It is a nice entry.
It made me think about it and you're right.
Good Luck.
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the frog bumped his ass wow good luck at judging -
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This is a take off on the old saying that "if a frog didnt leap he wouldnt bump his ass so much...it seems as if either it's too old of a saying or it had never made it to Canada. Anyway, thanks for the visit,
Evan
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Short and refreshing. You have a unique voice that is entirely your own and it's wonderful to see. Thank you for the giggle. -
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Lol..thanks for the nice comments given this litte fun work of mine,
Evan
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You surely killed the boredom angle with this beauty, I am still laughing Good luck in the contest
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Lol...dont ask me where this inspiration came from...like I said below, must be the meds! Thx for stopping in again,
Evan
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This is funny.i love it.
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Thanks for stopping in. Couldnt think of anything and then that old "if a frog wouldnt leap he wouldnt bump his ass so much" saying popped into this strange mind of mine...lol. Must be the meds..
Evan
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LOL
this is simple but funny, shame u got kicked out.. hmm .. great poem. do frogs think this i wonder LOL
if he should take the next leap or if he should pass
for he knows if he does he will bump his ass.
My favourite lines out of it
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I thought this was cute!!!funny and whimsical!!!
keep it up!!!
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`Lol
Thank you...it was submitted in a comtest, three lines, last word rhyming..and it got booted out because I used the word "ass"..lol I thought it was cute too nut was chastised my the originator of the contest saying she was "shocked" that I would enter that! So I had to cleab it up a bit...ans the newer version isnt nearly as funny. Thx again..
Evan
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I was shocked that you didn't follow the family content rule. After this, I guess I will have to revise that to neither allow words that have to be filtered.
But, of course, you can enter again with a hope that you'll moderately look at all contest directions,
SplishSplashPencil
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