I'm thinking about your pain;
thinking how I wish I could
erase these recent events.
Every eve and morn
I say a prayer
for your healing;
and think of you both
when I look at the sun
and the trees
and the earth.
I have hope for you both.
I hope you take strength from the heat of the sun;
inner calm from the gentle sway of the trees
and the stability of our lush earth.
May smiles lift your soul
and warming hugs calm your jagged nerves.
May you soon be strong again,
bringing charm to others lives once more.
A contest entry
- Contest - Healing Power for our "Lyrical Soul" - Big Points! by Mad Moon.
2525 points, ended December 12, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was inspirational without a doubt. Great words, very beautiful. And congrats on the Hm
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Thank you. This is beautiful. Your words are encouraging and uplifting.
~Lyrical
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Thanks for reading Lyrical soul, glad you liked it!
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A wonderfully heartfelt write that warms the very soul.
I especially love these lines:
"...I hope you take strength from the heat of the sun;
inner calm from the gentle sway of the trees
and the stability of our lush earth...."
How beautifully stated, and with such warmth and gorgeous imagery! This puts such a peaceful picture in the reader's mind. I am confident it will do the same for our dear friends. Thank you so much for your endearing words, and this fine offering. I know it will warm both their hearts when they read this!!
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Dear Mad moon,
Thanks for such a lovely comment on the poem I have submitted to your contest! I'm so glad you think it will work in the way in which i intended when I wrote it. I may not know the people that I have written too, but I still feel for them and hope that this brings some comfort on the road to their recovery!
Sarah
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Soulfull, hopefull and enriching.
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Thanks docbill!
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peace and healing flow through the poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you Jalalbad!
p.s anyone ever told you you look like Madge?
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Who is Madge? I am courious.
Smile,
Judy
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A beauty
A write that speaks of beauty. Wonderful piece
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Thanks for your lovely comment my friend!
Sarah
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