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Lighthouse

Strong
Lighthouse
Standing bold
On the hillside
Always there in view
Guiding ships to the shore
Silhouette in the moonlight
Bright for all travelers to see
Fulfilling what it was built to be
I stand in the water, the shore below
I gaze and wonder how it stays so strong
I want to be like that lighthouse above
Fulfill what God plans for me to be
Bringing souls to the lighthouse
Guiding them to Gods love
My self hid from view
In the background
Speaking truth
Lighthouse
Jesus

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  • Stickboy gold member
    November 11, 2007

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    beautiful poem my friend just beautiful, thanl you for sharing this and for entering contest best of luck


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    November 11, 2007

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    Very strong take on the picture.
    I really like the shape of the
    poem as well.
    Good luck in the contest.

    Jeannie


  • MassMan
    November 11, 2007

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    Wonderful

    This is such a strong vision of purpose
    with an icon that you must greatly identify with.
    The etheree style is in great form-
    Great sentiment, great form, great write!

    Hats of to you my Friend for a job well done-
    Good self-expression which is God-honoring!

    I like that!!!

    God Bless You to achieve your worthy Aim!

    David

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    November 11, 2007

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    Very nice take on the prompt thank you for sharing this with me.Goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes