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oX♥-Survive-♥Xo

All these wounds heal,
And once again I feel.
I'm more then this empty shell,
Am capable of escaping this hell.

The past will not hurt me,
If I break the chains I'm free.
Free to fly to a better place,
Where my heart beats to a slower pace.

I'm not that weakened girl,
All alone in a bitter world.
I'm strong enough to defend,
My soul and body will mend.

Surrounded in this light,
I will continue to fight.
My exsistance now comes alive,
With this love I can survive.

Author notes

"love is never jelous, or angry....."

about how I am moving on and letting go of the past and forgiving. I have started talking to alot of my family lately and have decided to allow myself to feel and grow in love. in part it also refer to how finally feeling love has allowed me to see the world in a different light and has taught me how to let love in as well as give it back.

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  • Garbage Candy
    November 21, 2007
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    amazing.

    this reminds me of myself at times. be strong. i love this write.


  • h e a r t s
    November 19, 2007

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    this is beaitiful in every aspect. the metamorphasis of yourself and yuor demeanor is portrayed incredibly, and im so happy for you. allowing yourself to move on and love again will help you grow as a person, and knowing that no matter the pain, you will heal again, is inspiring. please continue to write such inspiring words. <3 xox


  • gcpirelli
    November 18, 2007

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    I really enjoyed this poem. I can identify with what you are going through, I recently "let go" of my fears and decided to try and be the loving person I want to.
    Good luck and thank you for sharing.


  • foreverxnow
    November 18, 2007

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    this is a really good poem! i like the flow of it, as well as the rhyme. the imagery is intense, i could feel everything you were describing. nice job C:


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    November 18, 2007

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    Such beauty you wrote this poem!

    WE could really hear your tender heart r e a c h i n g
    through....good job dear poet! Much talent in you to
    write so brave and bold!!
    very inspiring for us all!
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen : ))

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