Tides tenderly kiss the shore
painting your name
within each wave of emotion
as passion reaches ripples
and sand seeps between toes,
tickling away tears
that were to come,
for, on this evening
there are only moments melting
as salty sounds take your breath
quenching more than a dream.
Dance into the living
as breezes soothe your senses
and cheeks shimmer blush
when skin is awakened
as blooming bud savors softness
of a new pearl petal.
Echoes of such splendor
fill cloudless skies
with whispers of poetry
as love strums your heartstrings.
♥♥
A contest entry
- What's the best thing for being sad...24 hours by kaibab.
1575 points, ended November 11, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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"painting your name
within each wave of emotion"
so beautiful!
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Love this!!
Beautiful Gem You have brought forth and touched the Heartstrings
Love this!! (have to reiterate)
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!!
Wooooooooooo Hooooooooooooooo
Love the: Tides tenderly kiss the shore
painting your name....aaaaaaaaaaaaw
Keep that quill dancing Beautiful!
Best wishes to You in all You do
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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"Dance into the living
as breezes soothe your senses
and cheeks shimmer blush
when skin is awakened
as blooming bud savors softness
of a new pearl petal."
Sighhh...Such a serene & lovely penning, my Friend. Congratulations, Lynda. Wanda
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WOW! I can see why this is a silver winner. Congratulations!
I can feel a softness and gentleness within your words. Almost like a flowing liquid wind touching the heart very deeply. Well written, my friend. Keep the ink flowing.
~Donna~
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I am blessed with much to love,
and poetic wind is always with me,
and in your seasons rushing wind smile
I do believe in every flower
as mind to shine when rain is falling...
such a lovely entry....
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Very beautiful! Soft and gentle, and imagery to definately take sadness away, lovely poem
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So lovely, a wonderful piece full of hope and healing, poetry and love creating beautiful music... Best of luck in the contest!
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