Through a dark velvet haze,
of tethered obscurity's vein.
Runs the essence of life's blood,
of ultraviolet Plutonian grain.
Something right from the start,
bears a strange resemblance.
To a morphed Alpha Omega,
of collective transcendence.
Kekule's formulation of a benzene ring,
holds precious answers to everything.
Centripetal force of creation divine,
sheer energy force of life that binds.
From creational start to death's final hour,
returning vibration to the higher power.
Author notes
Consider the three legged stool. Of man,woman, child within the circle of protection. And, doesn't turn about become fair play in Karma? The causical force eternal of life energy is the circle's motion. Pluto's number is 0.
Foot Note;
Pluto
Come wander with me, she said,
Into regions yet untrod;
And read what is still unread
In the manuscripts of God.
_ Longfellow
Copyright © 1998 by Rosanna L. Hamilton. all rights reserved;
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Intellectually stimulating
to say the least. I thought I was the only one who wrote like that, and then I feel really embarrassed when I must explain all my references in author's notes. I loved it~
Write On!
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DragonBlue
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Great content and knowledge expressed with spiritual references! I stumbled a bit with the rhyme and flow..
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I can try. What I am attempting to express here is a big picture of a fleeting thought/idea of creations power more or less. It reasons that all things come and continue in full circle which is an eternal power source of creation/life force if you will.It combines string therory married to vibratory energy repeating.Kukules formulation is metaphor in motion and relevent to explaining a continuem.His dream illuminating proven atom/carbon complex of a snake eating it's own tail comes to play in thoughts of energy in the physical realm and it's counter part of eternal creation of a spiritual kind.What flashes occasionally in milisecond thoughts to us all. May well hold the obscure yet forever teetherd vein of existance in fact.
Hence the most important part/verse in this relative would be,"Kekule's formulation of a benzene ring,
holds precious answers to everything.
Centripetal force of creation divine,
sheer energy force of life that binds".
Centriprical(I've more than likely mispelled twice no less,but motion of the circle I hope you get).Is eternal and boundless from every direction and on every level. Not an easy idea/thought,ideal for a layman to explain I must admit.And I'm certainly no accademic marvel myself in attempting to express myown thoughts here. But, if in some small way . My ephifiny however fleeting but always repeating aids in comfort of thought resolutions to those who ponder a link everlasting of life eternal. Results in shared faith everlasting. I'm humbled to be in good company. You must of your self found something shared in this piece as an idea. To have asked for more elaboration on the subject. If I can after this help in explaining my thoughts on this,please don't hesitate in asking. Yet,...its only one uneducated womans opinion at best. But, one I can center on myself finding a balance.Thank you for asking.I'm flattered in humility to of been asked.
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Lovely phrasing, "tethered obscurity's vein" and intriguing "ultraviolet Plutonian grain."
In the 3rd stanza, you seem to be contemplating the fingerprint of the Creator in the otherwise unaccountable and substantial molecular stability beyond what could be expected in the benzene family.
Enjoyed your directing attention to "vibration" as well! Very appropriate title. I enjoyed this, it reminded me that creation's roots extend not only out through the grand cosmos, but ever more minutely inward, well beyond our ability to conceive.
Your author notes were enjoyable. Perhaps you could include a bit more information on Kekule's formulation, as it was unfamiliar to this reader?
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Stunning
I loved this poem, it reflects an authentic belief in creation
Love light and peace
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Potent and soft all at once...
this brings the reader into a lusher
world of relevance and perpetual moments.
This write can bend to fit anyone's
spirituality if they truly stop and take it in.
Blue
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Thank you Blue Rew. I suppose I must have managed getting my inspiration of divinity across back when I wrote this. I appreciate your comment and reading.LOL
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I do love the essence of this thought drift, as the imagery to me seems divine, the spirituality of this is unmatched. well done my friend.
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Thanks Tirrell. It's my own thoughts on what drives the life force in existance.
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Good job ...
but you have a typo here:
bares a strange resemblance. (bears a strange resemblance)
Otherwise, this is a fine poem.
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