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Reflections

As I look into the mirror,
What is it I see?
My own face, my reflection,
Looking back at me?
No.

As I look into the mirror,
What is it I feel?
My own eyes, my gaze,
Fall upon me?
No.

As I look into the mirror,
I see...
A small girls face looking,
Looking straight up at me,
Afraid.

As I look in to the mirror,
I feel...
Her cold, dead eyes,
Cut through me.

 

Then mist clouds the mirror,

I try to pull away,

"Savannah" she whispers,

I gasp in shock,

The temperature drops by ten degrees,

I shiver, but not because I'm cold,

Then all goes black.

 

"Savannah...Savannah..." a voice calls,

My eyes open,

They see the ceiling,

I look to the mirror,

Its gone.

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  • ZachP gold member
    November 11, 2007

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    An emotional shocker... it kind of freezes the heart when we have these reflections...

    nicely done, hun