magic and majesty
mesmerised with mystery
melting me into the moment
abstinence an asinine concept
an irrational pipe dream as
allure and aphrodisia
make me their slave
enticing embrace of
euphoria's promise to the heart
with your all enveloping beauty
completely enchanting
tantalising touch
tracing tender skin
in tantric tango
chastity consumed
by ceaseless caress
and charismatic charm
delight in dangerous desires
desperation, devotion, debauchery
all dazzle me with their delectable dance
fanciful fantasies flirt
with my flickering fetishes
forcing farcical fears asunder
restless soul rocking
rapidly to rhythmic throngs
of relentless roaring passion
zenith, zion, my zanzibar
dizzying heights of zest and zeal
zing through tingling veins
writhing, wriggling,
waiting for the wanton
whirlwind to wane
profound pleasure
so simple yet pure
powerful passion abates
leaving me to ponder
the propensity of perfection
Author notes
finished I think, any editorial critique is welcome.
A contest entry
- Expressing Your True Sensuality~ by poet2angels.
625 points, ended November 18, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Detailed critique welcome
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Beautifully written
Wonderful alliteration, emotion and flow..
Great job!
Lynda
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great start
keep going! please pretty please. especially loved the "asinine concept of abstinence". great word gymnastics -
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poem completed now, thanks again for your comments
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wow, your alliteration here is fantastic. you express beautiful sensuality with such amazing rhythym. fantastic job!
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poem completed now, thanks again for your comments
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