Two bodies as one,
kisses rain down
on bare skin.
Fingers entwine,
breathing a bit hard.
This is our love,
feelings beyond belief.
Embracing each other,
gently touching
every inch, to memorize
our bodies with closed eyes.
This is love and
it will last forever.
A contest entry
- Expressing Your True Sensuality~ by poet2angels.
625 points, ended November 18, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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lovely and touching story...
Beautiful job with this
Lynda
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Very very sensual I like the flow of this As far as I can tell the only thing you need to do is make your poems longer well done
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idk why i chose to read this poem first of all poems
teeheehee..
its good, the sequences to the events if you get what i mean
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This was really sweet, Leslie. I think the flow, the meaning, the wording and rhyme in this poem was so good and I think that you've shown me once again that you are one hell of a talented poet.
Keep up the great work, Leslie. I am looking forward to your future poems and other stuff. All of your stuff is just so damn great. Keep up the writing! -
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Thank you so much
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