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The Concert


My heart is beating,
a cliche, i know,
but it's very true
i can see why people use it all the time.

I'm up next,
and i can feel all of the eyes staring
at the velvet dress
that my mother made me wear.

I sit down at the stool,
and hit the first note,
"bing!" an ugly sound,
ooooooohhh, drat.

Another try,
wrong again.
                    and another. .
                            and another. .

finally I decide,
oh, darn this begining,
and i start two measures later in my piece.

And when i was done the audience clapped,
"thanks for trying to mke me feel better guys,"
I said to myself.

I dismally failed,
oh well, there's always
another concert.


Author notes

Ok, this actually happened to me last friday the 8th, i think.
Wow, i felt so bad, i could just feel the sorrow in my parents eyes without even looking at them.

SO? DO YOU FEEL BAD FOR ME YET?

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  • liduen silver member
    March 16, 2008
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    I feel very bad for you. thats really stinky!


  • StarIlluminated
    November 13, 2007
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    yes i feel bad for you!


  • uluvhappyendings
    November 11, 2007

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    KC kathyrn THATS NOT TRUE. I can tell dad and mom they would be disapointed. I know i'm a tattletailing brat. Why do you think mom and dad was sad? They were proud that you tried! Why do you do this?

    WHY?


    • LuckyBlackCat
      November 11, 2007
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      oh, it's ok lindsay. . . you misread my thingy here. . .I meant that they felt bad for me, so the sorrow was for me, it isn't so bad.

      • uluvhappyendings
        August 18, 2009
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        ok, I wan't really going to tattletAIL but I think you did fine in the concert.

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