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Angel of My Dreams

Sweet angel of my dreams,
I long for your sweet embrace.
I am happy when I sleep
because I get to pulled into your being.
You are my sanity.

Sweet angel of my dreams,
why can't we be together?
You live in a dark world
I can only find when I sleep.
Be real in my world, be here in my life.

Sweet angel of my dreams,
I long for your lips touch.
Our hands one in the other's,
breathing in the smells
we know too well.

Sweet angel of my dreams,
it's time to say goodbye.
If I can't have you with me here
and in my arms till the end of time.
Then I'm afraid that I must die.

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  • PureRomance
    November 20, 2007

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    This was beautifully penned. You did an excellent with portraying love being denied. Thank you for blessing me with the chance to read this poem. It is a very emotional poem. Very deep and paints a well-imaged picture in my mind. God bless you in all that you do and write and good luck to you and your poem in this contest and congrats with winning the HM.

  • Liquid memories
    November 15, 2007
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    touching with feelings. success in the contest

  • Liquid memories
    November 14, 2007
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    this was nicely done. success in the contest