As father sun
touched the earth
this morning
you'd think it was another day
Without you
the seasons change
all the same
and life goes on
without you
Oh yeah, life goes on
from begining to end
then the stories start all over again
no one
stays here forever
and sadly some will leave you behind
then life will go on
Flowers bloom
rivers rush to the sea
music plays
without you
the gentle breeze
flows through my hair
longer then
when you were here
Oh yeah, life goes on
from begining to end
then the stories start all over again
no one
stays here forever
and sadly some will leave you behind
then life will go on
The saddest part about it
lifes goes on
The saddest little part about this
so have I
Author notes
It's for the second one, it's just kind of what I thought when I was looking at it...
A contest entry
- PIF One Day Quickie (open for prewrites due to my mistake) by Stickboy.
950 points, ended November 14, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me Everything you've Got by CrystalJet.
600 points, ended March 14, 2008, 318 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Great
Another fantastic write. Cheers!
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great take on prompt , best of lick in this conest tahnk you for entering
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WOW
This is beautiful, tugged at my heart, good luck with the contest
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