A blossoming poet
in thoughtful pose,
pen stretched to the sun
in contemplation of love
and how
when day sinks
into black seas
hearts still hang upon the light.
Author notes
The image is of my own, one of my flower gardens.
A contest entry
- The Ultimate Sophistication by autarky.
700 points, ended November 30, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I felt every word of this lovely poem - the sun on my face, pen in hand, and the slow sinking of the day.
Ah, the beauty that can be found in a woodland flower...
Good luck in the contest.
~ crisstiena
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great
Good imagery and write I like "pen stretched to the sun
in contemplation of love' Best to you in the contest.
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