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Here Without You

What would the sun be
without the moon? Just like me
being without you.

Author notes

Just a random poem. The title is of my favorite song. if you haven't heard go to yahoo and click on music then find the music video "here without you" by three doors down. it is an amzing song. the chourus is the best!

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 20, 2007

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    This is a sad little piece.... life without the one you love, not an enviable position... great piece

    Karen

  • Justin3
    November 13, 2007
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    Well done, shows potential.


  • neoladyem
    November 11, 2007

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    This is great! For it be so short it feel powerful some how. You might try to give you hand at Haiku. You might be really good. I do hope though this means you're out of your writer's bloke.


  • Katie Lazette
    November 11, 2007
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    Nice

    I'll try to listen to the song. Your poem has a beauty all it's own.