The eagle stared, a gleam in her eye
She takes off, her wings expanding in full
Her shadow filled the sky with a subtle glory
With swift moves she glides, high in the air
So controlled, so self aware
At the same time she's free
No ties to keep her bound
As a person is free, so also they must be bound
Independent as they may be, they must also be tied to the ground
Author notes
Written for an english assignment
Comments
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the last two lines tied the poem together for me. great write.
MO.e
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this was great. I can see why you got an A+ on it. Very good write. I loved the contrast.
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This is an interesting poem, the first stanza is a beautiful description of an eagle taking flight, and the contrast of a human, who does have the freedom but will never be able to have that freedom of just taking flight. Beautiful.
Axe
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