I don't want to know no more
I don't want to find out.
Please, no more tears on the floor
My heart is giving out.
I'm fed up with the sickness
And the silences that kill
I'm fed up with your thickness.
Have you lost your very will?
The tears have just stopped coming now,
My eyes are drying out
I'm just looking for the rainbows now,
Is this what you call doubt?
A contest entry
- No Perfection by xTomorrowx.
500 points, ended June 6, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So?
Comments
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This is great, I laughed when I read the below comments, I too feel like I have far too many HM's, when I first started entering contests all I got was HM's, I really wanted a gold lol
The rhyme of this is great, it seems like something I write when I just start writing and don't really think about the words, you know how you just seem to know what the next words should be without thinking when you're on a roll?
I like it, thanks heaps for entering and good luck! =) -
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Yes...23 Hms and 12 other trophies.
it used to be 20 Hms and 2 other trophies though, so I'm getting better! 
I'm so glad you liked this, it took me about 3 minutes to write and I didn't have any time to proofread.
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Nice poem, it flows really well, but the meter is a little off. I hope you win gold in the contest! You probably don't need any more HM's. I mean, come on, you have about twenty-something, or is it more?
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Great poem. good imagery and flow. Good luck in the contest.
*peace*
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