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Ephemeral

When I say I’m not always be here,
I’m not saying I’m not being near.
Even my wick is not burning
I’ll be the invisible light that is always shining
For that it is worthwhile,
To see you smile
Even from a frame from a thousand mile,
while you’re enjoying my memories warmth.

Don’t hate what was seen non-everlasting,
for what is essential is unseen but time lasting.
Despite the unacceptable realities in this world,
there are still fairy tales need to be told,
that can give you happiness in a thousand fold.
And what’s surprising, I’ll be in every tale you read,
so there’s nothing to mourn when I’m in bed

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  • willowprincess
    December 9, 2007
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    what beautiful rhyme and flow. this is fantastic. reallly touched my heart. great job.