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Dream shadows

Dreams
scrimmage
with reality
you scribbles,
scriggles me.


      oh!
      let me in
            dream shadows !

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  • Nuage
    November 22, 2007
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    *applaudgiggles*


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 13, 2007

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    i entered this one too...I get what you are trying to say...A womans thoughts, scribbling,whats' on her mind...You want in to know what she is thinking in her dreams....What she is really wanting to say..not to be shut out.....Good words