No matter what happens, no matter when all is said and done, no matter how you get there or how you do it, life is nothing more, nothing less, then life, how you live it, how you die in it has no say, it’s how you make it there, how you get to the end, how you live through the middle, that’s what makes the difference
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it's a bit long and a bit crap but i gave it a shot
A contest entry
- Rule by the people round one by star wars fanatic.
450 points, ended December 16, 2007, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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there are a few things structure-wise that could be corrected. Let me know if you're interested in editing, and I'll help. But it wasn't THAT MUCH crap. Welcome to the next round.
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sure, i'll edit it if you like, i never done one of these things before so i figured go out of the comfort zone and what not
by saying "welcome to the next round" you mean i got through yeah?
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Yes, you sure did. Could you send me a message, so I know your user name, please? Then I'll help you edit.
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Well sometimes they need to be long to say what needs to be said
And who really cares anyway when it's as insightful and as true as this. Certainly makes me think. The hardest part for me is knowing this but also knowing that it can be much more difficult to actually DO it (live the way I want, and get there the way I believe I should)....
But you're right, life is life, and it's what you make it, as hard as that can be.
♥
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Interesting
I think you have an obsession with this background
but I love the quote
Long quotes rock just as much as short ones
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
Love you little brother
~Manda
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