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Forgiven

Forgiven seemed to echo...
Loudly, silently, oddly enchanting
Sounds, vibrations... nearly lost in the
Chaos of a mind long since abanoded of hope
And love and all those things that make one feel
That feed the want to be alive... for just a little be longer
Causing us to hold onto those last seconds with a grip
So tight knuckles bleed white, and fingernails find bone
Beneath the layers and layers... oh the layers..

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  • Apsinthion
    November 14, 2007

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    pretty intriguing write, and has a sense of weirdness in it.. i like that..

    "And love and all those things that make one feel
    That feed the want to be alive... for just a little be longer "

    very good write..

    ~rana~



    • unheardwisdom
      November 14, 2007
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      Thanks for reading... and weird could pretty much describe anything i write thesedays lol