Words spoken in silence… it seems
A figure behind a mask
Or perhaps an idea, that found substance and mass
To stand and show the world,
What one can do,
With a written word or two
Scrawled out on warm and breathing
Flesh… Like a fire
Spreading to witness rebirth
And creativity with a single moment
Caught in memory…
Author notes
Now i'm not sure how many of you frequent youtube or not... but this poem was inspired/written for one person on there... who seems to inspire creativity and thoughts in others. http://www.youtube.com/user/MadV Check out his videos they may make you pause and think... *dances off to play with clay* Have a nice night/day
Why in the world does the poem get so many reads? It's so terrible >_>
Please tell me what you think
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this is real good...whoever inspired it will be happy to know it was written with them in mind...great job...keep writing and keep sharing...peace an dlight, kp
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My first impression was that this poem was written about some sort of writer/artist. I read your notes and found that to be half true. I like the picture you paint with these words. Now you allude to mystery, but at the same time you have a lighter air to it. It sends a happier message that not all poets or creative people are dark and mysterious. Well written!
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....its good..but its confusing lol
dont feel bad, i get confused reallyyyy easily haha
but yeah its a great poem
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Yay! Youtube! Great idea for gaining inspiration and I think this was a great poem that came out of that inspiration. Wonderful job! I especially liked the line "And creativity with a single moment
Caught in memory…" because I think that's what creativity is always trying to do, just capture that moment in your memory. I hope you continue to try to capture your own memories because you have such talent and skill with words and you're a blessing to this community! -
A great piece to read....
you have captured the reader from start to end..
well written
thanks for sharing this piece
Lyre-Bird-
Tracey
keep writing &
keep your words flowing...
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nice work thanks for sharing
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oh so lovely! i really enjoyed this, so much was said in a short piece. your imagery was so good too, really great work!!
bravo
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An enjoyable piece of poetry, an uplifting poem, the tone is quite light and airy, smiles are found. A good poem.
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"Flesh... Like a fire
Spreading to witness rebirth"
This poem has a concrete foundation and such depth... Your words are enchanting, and I ma completely captured by every part of this poem.
Wonderful. Thank you for sharing!
M a r l u x i a
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Thank you for reading
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Nice write.
the last three lines are original and my favorite. -
wow! that was the best poem I've read so far.
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Thank you for reading
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The wording of this poem is amazing... I really like the last two lines, they finished the poem off perfectly... the rhyme in the middle is a little off-putting though - or that might just be me... anyway, a very enjoyable read
Keep writing
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I wrote this so quickly i never noticed the ryhme, perhaps I shall change it. Thank you for reading.
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wonderful
very creative, profound and inspiring
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Thanks for reading
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Very interesting... But, overall great write. I liked the imagery... the descriptions were very well thought out.
I liked the flow too... It was very good, but somewhat rocky in some places.
~ Great job
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Thanks for reading
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