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Blessed I Have Been

I walk into a room,
I get knocked off my feet.
The beauty God has blessed me with,
Has me wondering if I'm even worthy.

You stop in front of me,
The words that flow from you mouth,
Seem like blessing and prasies,
But all your saying is HI!

I wanna say here's my heart,
Take it, It's all yours.
But you don't know I like you,
Why can I not tell you.

Can I talk to you,
Theres something I need to day.
The feelings are strong,
I want to share them with you.

I try to be a better person,
Put my bad self behind.
Live by God's ways,
To make you a happier person.

As I glance at you from across the room,
Fireworks explode in my eyes.
I can't help but think,
That you are the most beautiful woman ever.

I want to ask you a question,
But I'll wait till your finished reading.
Cause they are so important.
As you are to me.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Tazmanian Poet
    March 7, 2008

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    this is amazing...Wow,talent.Talent.Talent.Talent.Talent.
    talent.talent.talent.talent.talent.talent.talent.Lol.
    Okay now that i said that 20 times.....PERFECT!


  • XxStIlLhErExX
    January 3, 2008
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    this is such a pretty poem.
    great use of words.
    and keep up the good work.
    Caycee*


  • Angel Full Of Hurt
    December 2, 2007

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    better ask than nothing

    Afraid of rejection? don't be..because you'll feel like that again with another woman....anyway have a go..take a try..tell her how you feel..that you like her...tell her even if she is reading or pass her a poem and smile while she reads..anyway..CLEVER POEM..very sweet and charming....you write a diamond!