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What Would You

What would you say,
If I just walked right past you.
Didn't say a word,
Not even a single glance.

What would you say,
If I kissed you on the cheek.
Just a simple peck,
Nothing to in depth.

What would you say,
If I didn't come around.
You as a friend,
Never seeing me again.

Do you even notice me,
When I glance at you.
Letting your beauty run through me,
As if it were rapaging Horse.

What would you do,
If I held your hand.
Took it like we were dating,
And walk through campus like that.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Tazmanian Poet
    March 7, 2008

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    Okayy this is really good.You are very talented and i know i keep telling you that but i only state the obvious and the truth...i enjoyed readng this.


  • david0go0away
    November 14, 2007

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    I really like this it's pretty and has a nice flow and it shows feeling very good. I really like this part Do you even notice me,
    When I glance at you.
    Letting your beauty run through me,
    As if it were rapaging Horse.