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The Forgotten

Lets wake up

In each other's faces

Routines we can't breathe through

Lets get ready

Kiss fast

Leave for 9 to 5

Forget our eyes

That once did meet

Forget our hands

The old touch

Forget romance 

Nights under stars

Pretend

Fill our silence

Find new words

Are we old?

You are here

Yet I miss you so

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  • Year of the Fire
    March 6

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    You create the feeling of loneliness in spirit. I loved every part of this poem. Waht was once a romance has become a souless day by day by day burden. You convey this emotion greatly.

  • celadia
    January 6
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    These two people need each other, it's a good poem with all the right words in the right place.


  • Polkadot Cadaver silver member
    December 14, 2007

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    Thought it was a powerful and well written read. Everything just seems to flow really good. Keep up the good writing


  • Nikkisixxx
    December 13, 2007

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    I don't know the feeling of this yet but it seems to be the case for a lot of people. I liked the honesty in this piece and the way it all flowed.

  • raggyann
    December 7, 2007

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    i know this feling sad but true
    the world works so much it has lost touch with life then you love and love fails
    sad how life is
    you wrote this poem so very well


  • creationsfromheart silver member
    November 12, 2007

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    Good write, and I can identify with this all too well, my man works all the time 68 hours last week. we miss him but the over time pay does help me get over it a bit

  • Garbage Candy
    November 12, 2007
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    you need to post more poetry damn it.

  • AnotherFace
    November 11, 2007
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    I very much enjoyed this piece.

  • Garbage Candy
    November 11, 2007
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    YOU DRUNK BASTARD LOL

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