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Dear Friend

Dear friend- here I am
Waiting for you to take my hand.
I will lead you to a happy place,
and put a smile on your face.

With me beside you.
Jesus holding you,
I know we'll make it through.

Dear friend- here I am
To take away all your fears
To dry up all your tears.

You know that I am here,
You shouldn't shed a tear.
Put the past behind,
And keep God in your mind.

Dear friend- here I am
I want you to know
That I love you so.

Author notes

Um... This kinda just came about.  I read something from a dear friend, and out popped this.  You know who you are!!  Maybe thats the inspiration behind this.....    

Written October 19th, 2003

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  • Lady Sundra
    January 18, 2004
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    Wonderful. To have such a friend and Jesus to be the Lord of the friendship is awesome indeed. Excellent write. Keep on penning!
    ~Sundra


  • leannewales
    November 16, 2003
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    awwww it's sweet....nicely written too...there are big ships...there are small ships...but the best ships...are friend ships.....hugs....leanne....xxxx

  • PoetGirlRavioli
    October 25, 2003
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    This is so sweet! I love it! It's awesome! Great job! Keep on writing! Thanks for the opportunity to comment on it! God bless!

    ~Pasta Baby~


  • Talia
    October 25, 2003
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    A bind between two people that will last for an eternity, whether you still know them in a few times or not. But when you think on them, you'll still feel the same towards them. This is a very spiritual write. Well done

    Natalia

  • Desdemona
    October 25, 2003
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    great

    awwwww that is nice.. friendship is always special.. very nice write.


  • myrataal silver member
    October 25, 2003
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    Friendship is precious ... sometimes it is much stronger than romantic love ... It is good to say: I love you. I do it all the time ... But: it must come from your heart.

    Such a fine read. Thank you.

    Myra

  • TheWiseOne08
    October 25, 2003
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    Great poem

    this is a good poem. I like how youhave the rhyming. Good job! Well, thats all I have ta say for now, So......


    God Bless,
    ~`Chris`~

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