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Queen Of Passions Garden

I Queen of garden ambrosia
Serenade my bloom of passion
In curves exotic dance to inspire you

Soft petals tap in our secret lustful soul
Seductively flesh touch smoldering embers

Kissing my lips flower luscious dew in silky strokes
Flames desire, overpowers my senses and entice ecstasy

I breathe in perfume's breath whisper
Savoring in euphoric rhythm on exquisite flower beds
Mystically I fly on wings of paradise forever and a day

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 6, 2008

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    You are very beautiful poet here while sharing the depth of the love and the beauty of the love around the words you crafted my friend..well done...


  • penman gold member
    January 15, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Such terrific descriptions. A very vivid poem.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 11, 2007
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    Looks like your entry duped here :)


  • Princess-nee
    November 11, 2007

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    In a fantasy Land

    Wow this is so stunning both the poem and the picture.Even the border.A great combination

    Everything here makes the reader so alive and realistic.The words are capturing and indeed passionate.
    loved it


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 10, 2007

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    this is just beautiful
    love the border and the picture
    for together they set the mood to
    this place you have written about

    Riftkin

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