Lies flowing through
my mind , like a raging
storm
My heart feeling the
pain that I call love,
doing nothing but
pull me down
I try to fight, but
I fight unarmed against
the ultimate army...
Myself
I can't take this pain
it flows through my
veins like a poison taking
me to my inevitable demise
Thats why I say to myself
I Surrender
Author notes
My life sux
A contest entry
- This is your opportunity to write about your life by only1love4ever.
758 points, ended November 27, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I cried writing this
Comments
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this is wow oh my god amazing
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Your life does not suck, nobody's life sucks, just think of all the good things that you have, the people around you that love you, think of everyday as another day to make a change, to reunite yourself with a chance to fulfill the very best in yourself...Don't self destroy because this world is too good for anyone to do such bad to themselves. I know that sometimes it gets to be so hard, and things can really take you down, but in the end I hope that you will find, that everything will be just fine.
Very good writing, I wish that you could see things through a different perspective, and if you ever need someone to help you through your days, I am here for you!
Much love, only1love4ever. -
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You and me both, and I thank you for caring.
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