Rings go off in my head.
Its finally become that time
My friend and brother in arms has returned.
This time to stay he has been gone for sometime,
But now has retuned to his home kingdom again.
Where I welcome him with open arms.
Welcome home Lord Dragon Aleph.
You have been missed more than you know,
I feel as though a piece of me has been put back.
We are whole once again.
We will rein chaos on the world.
The time has come as he is here.
Author notes
For the return of my Friend Dragon Aleph
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Aye, indeed my dear brother was missed, no matter how close or far he was. I'm sure you two can cook up some trouble soon.
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I did not know how much I was missed, I am honored by you're words my friend...no, my brother...I thank you. We shall indeed reign chaos upon the world.
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a good write thanks for sharing hope your friend and you have a great time
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It reads pretty directly, not much hidden or ambiguous. My only suggestion is the first line should read ..........."Rings go off in my head"..........or something different than "rings goes"...........it just doesn't match or make sense .... I am not sure if it is grammatically even correct. OH well, just a suggestion.
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Thankyou, I see your point I worte this in like fove mins so I figured it would have some gimmics lol thanks for being honest.
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Nice rythm and imagery. Good imagination, the write was a bit short and could probably be expanded. Enjoyable nevertheless.
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