I hear the blast of ship’s whistle blowing.
As scattering of finger clouds whisk by.
Blazing ball of hot fire setting in the sky.
Flock of seagulls flying around crowing.
Ship’s bough heads out as water is flowing.
Breath taking view, pausing with a long sigh...
Stage is set, the trip home and good bye.
Romance has blossom, as ship is going.
Walking along the deck, glorious moon.
Wonder if courtship can take up again.
Home away from a romantic vista.
Thoughts must of shown, my face had gloom.
My tears were running down my face like rain.
Smile assured me, dancing at the fiesta.
Author notes
I wrote this as a class. Poem writen wthin guidelines of assignment. True rhymes, Imperfect rhymes, eye rhyme. abbaabba cdecde
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A contest entry
- Kiss The Sun Goodnight by Princess Perdue.
1000 points, ended November 18, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - POETRY MONTH! by WesBreezyxxx.
300 points, ended April 21, 2008, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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great u take me write to that place thanks for entering
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This is so beautiful..a lot of lines are my fav in this one.....so I am not going to mention them coz that would pretty much cover the whole poem...Congrats on the trophy!
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Thank you so much for this beautiful entry into my contest. I think you did an excellent job and love where you took the picture. Well done and good luck in my contest.
Shaz xx
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Beautiful write. I liked the flow of this. The rhyme of it was different, but it seemed to flow well. Wonderful imagery and emotion in this piece. Good luck in the contest.
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