Looking into each others eyes
After a candlelight dinner
We see and know that look of desire.
With wine, like dripping rubies in a glass
We reach across the table
As sparks arcs
Across our finger tips
Because we must have each other for dessert.
Let us drink more wine
And let our bodies be like candles
Melting into a single wax.
Oh, what a body you have.
As I look at your beauty
And the sensual soft lines
Of your beautiful breasts
There are times
I just want to undress you with my teeth
But then, you slowly slip off your panties
And there you are in your nakedness.
I feel like a kid in a candy store
Not knowing what I want to touch or taste first.
It all looks so delicious, your mouth, your lips,
And your breasts,
Suddenly, you draw my hand to your wetness
And I drop to my knees to taste it,
My tongue is like the sun
Going through your forest.
It’s as if I can see you with my tongue
And taste you with my fingers.
When I look at you
All my senses are turned on
And I hear them like musical instruments
Playing passionate love songs
Heating up the night to a boil.
Your female softness hardens me
And my male stiffness wants to melt you
As I want to love you with every piece of my body
And moisten you everywhere my tongue and lips can touch.
Your warmth lingers on my mouth
As my wide, wet kisses
Travels all over your silky skin
Wanting to devour you,
And get drunk on your body.
There’s almost more heat
Between us than we can bear
I want to slip my stiffness into your stillness
And awaken every sense of you
As I can hear your short shallow gasps
That are somehow mine too
And my soul slips from me
As it goes deep inside of you
And we both seek sexual perfection
Knowing it doesn’t exit
But we, like all lovers,
Insist in its possibility again and again
With the language of our heart.
A contest entry
- Let Me Feel Romanced by stavykm.
800 points, ended November 14, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It's sexytime (Erotic Writes) Now accepting PREWRITES!! by Poetic-Goddess.
475 points, ended November 25, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank You for entering
Very long
But I enjoy
Each part a little more
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I like this write. I wish my man could pen words like this
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Nice Write
Thank you for entering the contest. Very sexual write. I was looking more for romance then sex. Trying to avoid sex as long as possible. You did very nice here. I love your write, thank you for sharing with me. Good luck in the contest, Kelle Marie, stavykm and Christina
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I felt my head reeling as I read this piece. So sensual, so sexy, so loving. I very much enjoyed reading this wonderful write
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Good write!!!!Love how it goes from the dinner to the deed.Keep up the good work cant wait to read more of your work!!!
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