My beloved, is he
that makes me sigh
taking my breath away
Painting vibrant colors
on my black and white dreams
taking my breath away
Painting vibrant colors
on my black and white dreams
Author notes
Prompt:"Beloved" Bare your soul. What this word means to you.
In a list
A contest entry
- Beloved by be a circle.
750 points, ended November 18, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh u got me with this one I loved the essence of this. So very graceful.
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I liked it. It's short and simple, but efficient. Thanks for entering, and good luck!
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cute poem
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Magnificent wording...your unique verse covers the pic which showed me your soul revealed. I just love how you talent shows through in these few lines. You are an dynamic poetess.......novy
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So rich a sigh and given by so textured a soul. So much is held and rarely shared that one is blessed when love shows where we can open up our doors and share all the richness there to give.
Love, Tom B.
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awwwwwwwwww such tenderness you have recorded. very nice, and the picture flows perfectly. success in the contest.
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so sweet
the feelings of love pour out like syrup in this piece!
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