Leave a mark on the path society leads me,
walk towards an enticement of integrity-
Lust fulfillment falling upwards straight,
Minds in a sensual pleasure of state.
Dimensions of perspective follow through,
the surrounding of stimulant sparks too-
Behind the border life leading to the lost,
Bodies floating soundly to the right of youth.
Enter the jester of a new found surprise,
feet put forward my past history which lies-
dead to the heavens, remain solo and free,
life so love precautionary, leads to distortionary.
A contest entry
- What's the best thing for being sad...24 hours by kaibab.
1575 points, ended November 11, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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Live wild and fearless...looking forward to the now...in words of wow...thanks so much
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Anapestic metre is my favourite form and here I found it efortlessly used in many lines. That in itself is reason enough for three cheers, but it even makes sense! Subtle humour adds its bit to a pleasant reading!
Terry
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