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Unwanted Solitude

Among the beaten and the damned
I’m comfortable

Among the humble and the broken
I’m comfortable

My help may be unwanted
But at least my presence is known
At least someone knows I care,
someone knows I’m there

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 11, 2007

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    I love the "real' feel of this piece. It has an honesty that really sticks out. I enjoyed this one and must say it is one to remind one to live for themselves. Good piece!


  • Olivias Violin
    November 10, 2007
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    Very Good!