Among the beaten and the damned
I’m comfortable
Among the humble and the broken
I’m comfortable
My help may be unwanted
But at least my presence is known
At least someone knows I care,
someone knows I’m there
A contest entry
- Secrets of the Garden - This one is for everyone! by Amunet Wolfbane.
525 points, ended November 11, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love the "real' feel of this piece. It has an honesty that really sticks out. I enjoyed this one and must say it is one to remind one to live for themselves. Good piece!
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Very Good!


