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My Garden

My garden
Is full of happiness
The trees there
Can grow taller than any where else
I have many friends who live there
They all understand me
And they all love me
But the most wonderful thing
Is I control my destiny when I am there
No one can tell me
Not to be me
Not to be happy
Not to love
Not to understand
Because they all do the same as me 

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 11, 2007

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    We are the keeper and rulers of our dreams. It is our place and we do well to claim it as such. This speaks your heart. I like that a lot. Very nicely done :D


  • Olivias Violin
    November 10, 2007
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    I like this poem very much!