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Go ahead, make my day !!

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Did you really think I would let you continue
your abuse for the rest of my life..
I have had enough and thought about this moment
so many times…
It has flashed through my mind
like a B-rated movie

Don’t look at me like you are surprised
Not so tough now are you?
Wipe that smirk off your face
I have a bunch of reasons I am

holding this gun to your head
Shall I name them for you
or should I just pump 12 of them into you

Shut-up, I didn’t say you could speak
Sit there and sweat it out a bit
You have humiliated me for years
Leaving  marks on my body
then begging me to forgive you,
promising you wouldn’t do it again

 

I’m not waiting for any promises today
Don’t want them, don’t need them
I have everything under control
right here in my hand


You think I am afraid to pull the trigger
Guess again….

 

 

 

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  • sassylilpoet gold member
    December 20, 2007

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    as an abuse survivor, I've played this scenario many times over in my mind, thankfully, I found a way out before it came to this, my two children were the only reason I didn't really make his day.
    I felt the passion and pain in this write as if it were a fresh slap acrossed my face. This reminds me of my hair stylist's ex-husband. She was abused for many years, and he was diagnosed as bi-polar/manic depressive. One night he lost it, and hit her with a tire tool, then cried and apologized and went to sleep thinking he'd made ammends. He awoke with the barrel of a gun stuck in the back of his head, and her telling him to give her one good reason why she shouldn't pull the trigger. She said she kept that gun on him many hours and relished the sweet sound of him begging for his life. She left and never looked back. Awsome write, that I'm sure many on here can relate to.

    God Bless and Keep You,
    Happy Holidays,
    Sincerely,
    Sassy


  • crimsondew silver member
    November 25, 2007
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    Very well written...abuse should not be withstood...congrats on the HM


  • ennovy silver member
    November 11, 2007

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    This like watching a scene before your very eyes play out, or when I put myself in her shoes. I was amazed at the power I felt, the strong emotions. It made me wonder if I could do this? Could I pull a trigger? Well I don't know but I sure will not take abuse. You rocked this write...The verses are well balanced, smooth read, you truly captured the confessions of the soul........loved it!...novy


  • CherryOnTop
    November 11, 2007
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    This is powerful and intense. Good luck in my contest.

  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 11, 2007

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    HOLY CRAP!

    Power-packed full of emotion! Oh man he sure seems like he's about to get his! this is very dark, but damn good! good luck in the contest!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 10, 2007

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    This was deep have been here sweetie. Have been here. well done on sharing and your words made me feel like i was right there.
    best wishes hon
    tory


  • Lonewolf2008 gold member
    November 10, 2007

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    very nice and the feelings were felt by this reader. I could relate when i came close to killing my sister`s abuser when i was 8. i know he never returned. thanks for sharing this.

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