For those who need safety
Where everything is as it seems
Theres a safety that I know
Theres safety in your dreams
Your dreams hold hope
Hope for a new day
Where a path is revealed
With a different way
Dreams provide a shelter
That real life does not hold
Shelter to protect from reality
And a harm that is untold
For all those who need safety
Where everything is as it seems
With shelter from harsh reality
Theres safety in your dreams
A contest entry
- Safe? by Naridill.
495 points, ended November 11, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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Beautifully scribed, I like this idea around this one. Nicely penned.
Thankies for entering and much luck
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Thanx
Thanx for the comment! It means so much to me! I'm new to poetry and i love some of the poetry i read! Just wanted to say thanx!
WP
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