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Take a Look at It

You ain’t gonna look?

Oh what a shocker it is
The dead beat is upstairs
The decaying mass odors
Are calling out your name

But all the cries seem to be in vain

Remember the rotten eggs in the case
Scrambled garlic potatoes
And the chili bowl you had
I think it was last week

Now the pig flew in
The winds of odor called for him
Through the back entrance
Went straight to heaven upstairs
It’s a feast of lifetime
For the king of beasts

Oh wait oh that deadbeat fragrance
Seems so very familiar
Remember the last month
When you’d forgotten to clean up your den?
You had a party of five
Laying dead inside the black bag
Where you had bear bottles
With dead chicken bones

Downstairs was just last week
It had change the scenery
Now the castle for foul fragrance
Had to be built all over
Where it’s much easier to survive

Upstairs, yes one place
Heaven on earth for trash to live
May be it needs to find a new apartment
You’re already paying the rent
The truck comes every morning
Let go now of those scrambled eggs

Time to move it now
Just go take look upstairs
It’s waiting for you to take over
Take charge and get rid of the dead rat
Lying on the bed of stale garlic potatoes
In the corner of your attic

Oh you so got to take look at it
NOW!!!

Author notes

Here it is an answer to the question my friend dillpickle62 had, he's the one to be blamed for this weird piece... I was forced to answer him lol... in response to the following:
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  • Sandygram silver member
    November 10, 2007

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    Hello minoo, I had to go read the other poem. Now this all makes sense. Or makes non-sense. You made me smile an hold my nose at the same time. Great write as always. You take care my friend, Sandy


    • imperfectperfection
      November 10, 2007
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      Thanks Sandy

      Thanks Sandy for taking time to read this silly poem... I was just being silly & that's exactly what it is makes non-sense lol ... but I'm glad it made you smile though... thanks again for your time hun.... take care Minoo

  • dillpickle62
    November 10, 2007

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    Hahahahaha

    hahahahahaha....BRATTY PRINCESS!!!!!
    Gottah jam but will come back and deal with YOU later. hahahahaha....


    • imperfectperfection
      November 10, 2007
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      lol

      Proud to be ... love it every bit of it too... oh you asked for it... deal with I, ME, & myself... You're on buddy lol... have you already read the warning label - WARNING .. that's it - what else did you expect? Thanks for reading teh response... enjoy jammin